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PostSubject: Holy Demon Slayer Magic   Sun 30 Aug 2015, 12:43 pm

Name of Magic: Holy Demon Slayer magic
Type/Subtype of Magic: Light, Slayer
Current Rank: D
Description: This branch of Slayer magic allows Ryoshi, its only user, the ability to create and mold bright, pure white light for a variety of effects. This light is made solid, allowing for devastating physical attacks. The objects that can be created by this magic are limited only by Ryoshi's imagination. Like other Slayer Magics, this magic gives its user keener senses, the most noticeable being sight, smell and hearing.
Strengths:

  • This magic is strong against shadow or darkness-based magic, obliterating such spells of lesser rank
  • This magic is strong against Dark-aligned creatures such as Demons, Undead monsters, and Demi-Demons
  • This magic can be used in a wide variety of ways, allowing for much improvisation and improvement

Weaknesses:

  • Shadow-based magics over two ranks higher than this magic can overwhelm it, enveloping and snuffing it out
  • Light-aligned creatures are immune to it's anti-Darkness effects, affecting them the same as a normal magic would
  • The user cannot consume their own light to replenish their Mana


Traits:

  • Righteous Fury: When extremely irritated or experiencing feelings of anger, fury, rage or hate, white light will form an aura around Ryoshi's body and drift slowly upwards. This light embodies the fury of Heaven itself, and induces feelings of panic, fear and dread in those around Ryoshi that are weaker than him. Those stronger than him can resist the light's influence. On those it does affect, it causes a drop in Agility, Strength and Spell Power by five points, due to the overwhelming negative feelings. This effect lasts for three posts.
  • Light Form: Ryoshi can transform into a mass of white light, the shape of which can be manipulated at his will. This form is immune to physical attacks equal to the user's rank or below, making it a good defense. However, Ryoshi is still susceptible to magical attacks. While in this form, Ryoshi can teleport himself up to a hundred feet away, but only to and from a place touched by the light. Obviously, this teleportation would not work very well at night, unless the moon was very bright.
  • Speed of Light: With some concentration, Ryoshi can activate this ability. As a slight aura of bright white light envelops him, his Agility and Dexterity stats are boosted by ten, allowing him to move faster than usual.
  • Slayer Elemental Mastery - Light Sense, Elemental Consummation, Demon Force:
    Due to being a Slayer, Ryoshi has mastery over his respective element, light, being able to manipulate it at will. In addition to this, he has the ability to see anything the light touches within 100 feet. Essentially, he need only close his eyes and focus, and he would see the world without objects or shadows, seeing only light projected on surfaces. In this view, the background is black that fades into gray then white with distance, while the light is white in color. This is an ability he refers to as his 'light sense' or 'sixth sense.' In addition to this, when it is dark, he has perfect night vision. When using this ability, his eyes glow faintly and he can see through darkness as if it were light. Ryoshi also has the ability to consume existing light to restore Magic Power. If enough is consumed, he will enter the legendary state known as Demon Force, drastically increasing his already enhanced speed, strength, durability and magical might by ten points. In this form, an aura of white light surrounds him, constantly drifting upwards in streamers and being replaced. His fingers turn into long, hooked claws and his canines become enlarged fangs that constantly emerge from his lips while his other teeth become sharp. This state can only be attained once per thread, however.


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PostSubject: Re: Holy Demon Slayer Magic   Sun 30 Aug 2015, 1:22 pm

Hey there, the Almighty Krow-sama here, I will be reviewing your Magic today, got it?
Good. Now on the business, all changes will be in a bolded red.

Ryoshi wrote:
Name of Magic: Holy Demon Slayer magic
Type/Subtype of Magic: Light, Slayer
Current Rank: D
Description: This branch of Slayer magic allows Ryoshi, its only user, the ability to create and mold bright, pure white light for a variety of effects. This light is made solid, allowing for devastating physical attacks. The objects that can be created by this magic are limited only by Ryoshi's imagination. Like other Slayer Magics, this magic gives its user keener senses, the most noticeable being sight, smell and hearing.
There is no evidence to suggest that Slayer's outside of Dragon Slayer's possess enhanced senses, so please remove that bit. Also, you wouldn't be able to mold weapons and objects ot of light, the only reason Gray can do such with his Devil Slayer Magic is that he was originally a Maker Magic, so please change that bit.

Strengths:

  • This magic is strong against shadow or darkness-based magic, obliterating such spells of lesser rank
  • This magic is strong against Dark-aligned creatures such as Demons, Undead monsters, and Demi-Demons
  • This magic can be used in a wide variety of ways, allowing for much improvisation and improvement

Weaknesses:

  • Shadow-based magics over two ranks higher than this magic can overwhelm it, enveloping and snuffing it out
  • Light-aligned creatures are immune to it's anti-Darkness effects, affecting them the same as a normal magic would
  • The user cannot consume their own light to replenish their Mana


Traits:

  • Righteous Fury: When extremely irritated or experiencing feelings of anger, fury, rage or hate, white light will form an aura around Ryoshi's body and drift slowly upwards. This light embodies the fury of Heaven itself, and induces feelings of panic, fear and dread in those around Ryoshi that are weaker than him. Those stronger than him can resist the light's influence. Does Righteous Fury inflict any sort of Stat Decrease side-effect? If so, please eaborate on what type of decrease, the number value of it and for how long it lasts.
     
  • Light Form: Ryoshi can transform into a mass of white light, the shape of which can be manipulated at his will. This form is immune to physical attacks equal to the user's rank or below, making it a good defense. However, Ryoshi is still susceptible to magical attacks. While in this form, Ryoshi can teleport himself up to a hundred feet away, but only to and from a place touched by the light. Obviously, this teleportation would not work very well at night, unless the moon was very bright.

  • Speed of Light: With some concentration, Ryoshi can activate this ability. As a slight aura of bright white light envelops him, his Agility and Dexterity stats are boosted by ten, allowing him to move faster than usual.
  • Slayer Elemental Mastery - Light Sense, Elemental Consummation, Demon Force:
    Due to being a Slayer, Ryoshi has mastery over his respective element, light, being able to manipulate it at will. In addition to this, he has the ability to see anything the light touches within 100 feet. Essentially, he need only close his eyes and focus, and he would see the world without objects or shadows, seeing only light projected on surfaces. In this view, the background is black that fades into gray then white with distance, while the light is white in color. This is an ability he refers to as his 'light sense' or 'sixth sense.' In addition to this, when it is dark, he has perfect night vision. When using this ability, his eyes glow faintly and he can see through darkness as if it were light. Ryoshi also has the ability to consume existing light to restore Magic Power. If enough is consumed, he will enter the legendary state known as Demon Force, drastically increasing his already enhanced speed, strength, durability and magical might by ten points. In this form, an aura of white light surrounds him, constantly drifting upwards in streamers and being replaced. His fingers turn into long, hooked claws and his canines become enlarged fangs that constantly emerge from his lips while his other teeth become sharp. This state can only be attained once per thread, however.


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